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You need some random blah blah's in there.

Yeah. Thats what you need. Check out Iwannahamster... he does a lot of things like this too...

www.Iwannahamster.newgrounds.com

Great job not making it fluid and all!

I'mma gonna go with the flow. 1 star =D

Sacrafan responds:

Lolcumber.

Well...

The overall beat is good... but thats all it is... except for a little tiny bit later on. You need to have more varation to it. Other then that... Good job!

doomshock responds:

THANKS :)

Buwhahahahaha.

The song... is decent. Heck, better then I could do. Yet... not your best...

The main reason I wrote this review though is because of your response to the guy below me... HAHAHA. That is awesome.

Good job with remixing the song!

giftedbuttwisted responds:

This song sucks haha, probably the worst we've ever done

Good background music indeed.

One thing though... like you said... its one pad... repeating...

I think a good piano would of helped it a little bit. Maybe thats just me.

Other then missing a piano and only being one pad... It was ok... nothing huge.

Good job more or less...

Lamplighter responds:

Piano would be nice, but I spent too much time wondering what I should do with it. I was thinking of decreasing the attack on it... I don't know. I'm going on a long car trip tomorrow with nothing to do, so I'll experiment with this. Thanks for the review!

Dedications are great.

I've got a classical song aswell I'm working on. Also dedicated to someone...

Need some tips on it though... So... if you get a chance. Think ya could help me?

The song isn't bad... But its not your best... its got good structure, yet I think it lacked a real strong melody. Like you said. At times felt random...

Other then that this song was great!

Lamplighter responds:

I'm still working on melody and keeping a theme... Glad you thought the structure was good. Looking at my piano roll for this song, everything seems all over the place.

You're working on a classical song also? Cool, I'll see what I can help with!

Thanks for the review, LubLub!

Well...

It's a good loop... though I don't think the drums were needed...

Loops insanely well for being on newgrounds... usually they destroy the loopiness of songs... but this one looped almost perfectly.

Great job!

Lamplighter responds:

I think I might have overdone the drums when I added the tambourine and the snare... otherwise I thought the drums were fine.

Yeah, I noticed it looped pretty nicely. I just tried exporting it so that it would wrap whatever was on the end back to the beginning, which is why it starts with part of the ending open hat. I think it's better that way...

Thanks for the review!

I asked. You have to.

Yeah, So another great song... which is no real surprise... I mean it's like you can't make a bad song.

Like to hear this bulit upon. Its got solid structure.

Great job!

NickSandwich responds:

I have a LOT of bad songs. I just don't upload those ones :D
You should hear some of the crap from my first 5 or so years of music making, and I mean CRAP lol. Sure there's a few I still listen to and enjoy, but that's like... just a few.

I was hoping...

I was hoping that this would be a cover of Lovehatehero's "Fall"

Great song. Listen to it if you get a chance.

This song is pretty great though...
Seems though at sometimes there could be more background noise...

Also... No offense but your vocals in this one isn't as great as some of your other ones are... maybe re-record them?

Lyrics=Great.

Most everything else = Great =P

Waiting for your newest song man...

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Thanks man, I appreciate the honesty, this is a really old song recorded again on garageband so yeah, it sucks haha. Also it may be a little while for new music cuz we're movin our studio

Jello lol.

Jello mello...

Sacrafan responds:

...ollem olleJ

OH NO MY POKEMANS!

This link will explain the what I'm saying there:
http://media.photobucket.com/image/po kemans/hahaanne01/pokemans.jpg?o=4

Make sure to take the space out.

Poke'mon music was always an entertaining thing.

After hours upon hours of playing the game the music was still entertaining. Theres no way you can go wrong remaking a poke'mon song.

Great job with this. Awaiting some more of yours!

VGSongbird responds:

haha
I love tha picture. I think I saw that about a year ago, and I put it as my background for quite some time.
Looking back at this song, theres a few things I wish I couldve done. I want to make the guitar at the end softer, and the song could be longer.

but thanks for the compliment. ^_^

I can create melody, I can create a beat, but I'm not the one who creates the emotions you feel.

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