Like stated before, in the beginning they are a bit drowned out. Your vocals and your low end clash too much, but that's an easy fix if you were just to eq the vox a bit. Also, invest in some good headphones, it'll help you, and everything will sound awesome. You can get some good sennheiser headphones online (amazon,ebay) for 20$.
My gosh though, what the hell did you do with Clay? This is fucking incredible. This is so beyond anything you've made in the past. This is INCREDIBLE. Your progress is something that makes me happy to have known you when you started! Your skill and composure with this piece is phenomenal!
I'm having a 3rd listen-through now. This is seriously awesome. I can't believe how in love with this piece I am. Your build-ups are immaculate! The choices of synths are spectacular, and your use of counter-melodies is brilliant. This deserves so much more recognition that it has. Well done! Very well done!
Fav, 5'd! Moaaarrr plzz.
I'm responding to this with a giant smile on my face while knowing that I have to leave to work in the next 5 minutes... fuck... anyways though, haha, I am so glad that the song appealed to you that much. Honestly, this song only took 3 and a half hours of work time, as far as FL Studio tells me... could be more or less. I've been doing a lot of experimenting with EQing, but really don't see the point in going to far into it without the proper headphones.
I got to the final touches of creating the song and figured that I'd find some sort of a speech to be put in and in my opinion, I found a VERY fitting line of vocals for this. I'm loving this song as well, and that is so fucking rare. I usually hate all of my music but instead, I've been replaying this over and over again.
I really do know what you mean by the constructiveness of the song. It really is so different that my older songs. I feel like this song actually carries a story along with it, progressing just like a book all the way until the end. All of my older songs never really had a feeling like that.
Thanks for the review, it's always great to hear your opinion of my songs.
I agree with Badmaninc, this really shows a lot of emotion. The overwhelming feeling is somewhat dark, albeit that comes with a minor key. This really stands out from the rest of your work. It really shows what you feel. (Gay, I know.)
My gosh. They are some seriously heavy riffs throughout this though! I am in complete love with your ending though. The whole entire song could be composed with that tone, and I would be completely okay with it.
Fantastic stuff! \m/
Thanks dude! I worked REALLY hard and took my time with this one. I'm proud of this one! And I don't say that about a lot of my work lol. Thanks for the review and listen! :D
Hahahahaha, this is incredible! Seriously, your voice is spectacular! Very versatile! I can definitely picture you hosting a dj talk show!
Only if they let me play your fucking rad music, dude.
Whao man! This is killer! Seriously incredible! I only have one quarrel, and it just feels like this is lacking some low-end. Are you using a synth here? The guitars sound a bit off, only in the higher parts.
Crazy stuff man!
Yeah, I use sytrus.
Thanks for the comment : DD
I didn't think the intro was very lacking at all. I'd be perfectly content with listening to a whole piece of simply piano. I'm the odd one out on newgrounds though :P
Excellent work good sir!
It's awesome to see one of your reviews again. I'd be perfectly fine with a giant piano progressive song but I'm not really good and creating a changing melody that still sounds good after the first couple bars... But I'm definitely in agreement with you on that one, haha. Glad you enjoyed the song and as always, thanks for the review!
Very Mellow. I love the piano, it's gorgeous. The transition around :30, is a little awkward. The beginning and the next part just don't seem to fit together. I very much like what you had in the beginning. You should keep that flowing.
I will post one with just the start up part I hope you will enjoy that one
Wow. This is extremely impressive! I'm surprised to find such a quality piece on newgrounds! Your leads, and solos, are mouth-watering sexy goodness.
Wow, thank you so much, man! Haha that means a ton to me. I appreciate the kind words and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Keep it brutal \m/
Hell yeah it's on. Almost finished already. >:D
I can do this all day babaaay!
damn you're quick
I'll be honest, at first, I thought I was going to hate it. But then it kicked in, and it's got some serious groove to it. Your lead synth could use to change up a little bit, and the intro could use a little smoother of a transition, but this is a pretty kickass song.
Bravo good sir.
I tried to make something less nonsensical then what i usually do, I think i like it for the fact that it sounds more "Typical". It's definitely just a repeating pattern. I'll take you're wise words you definitely know what you're doing much more than i do. I appreciate the compliments.
Jealous in so many ways.
Seriously, what the hell dude. Where has this stuff been all long? You could be... like... fucking mozart or something. Shiiiiiiiizzzz.
Gorgeous. Download/fav for me!
Awwww thanks buddy!
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