Hrmm.
At 30 seconds when the kick comes in, I think its okay, but I feel as thought the kick should have more presence...
The drums are quite unique. I really think they are quite good.
The melody is similar to most trance songs, but I think your drum work was pretty effective.
So I guess what I'm saying here. Is Drums = Yes. Melody = Okay.
Good work here good sir.