Hmm...
Boo bass :( That noise pisses me off like none other. Sorry. It just does. Maybe try using fl slayer fretless bass? That's another one that works nice.
Other then that. The fruity kick seemed to get a little annoying after a while, but I liked it's insane beat.
The overall melody was there enough for it to really stand out to me. It just seemed like more of a dnb song.
Opening's good though. Really good.
Keep it up man.
BooBass ain't my favorite either but I thought it worked quite well here. But everyone's taste is different. (I'm also lazy.) So yeah.
I thought the beat turned out good. Glad you liked it.
I totally agree that it's a DnB song, but I put it in the video game category because it's a remix of a video game song. Duh. :P
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Lub!
Dude...
Your songs are so amazing. This is by far your best. No doubt.
Riffs are awesome, and they variate enough to keep you satisfied... Right as you start really headbanging you throw in a mellow area. Then bring it back with a kick-ass double kicker and insane riffs.
Then... when you think it's reached it's peak of awesomeness, you throw in a piano and make it all the more different and enticing. Then BOOM! More double kickers.
You have some awesome playing skillz! Keep at this my man!
Oh, also. I should add this. I've shown your music to 7 different friends at school. Everyone of them is hooked on your music. You have an awesome talent man! Don't be discouraged by the 0 bombers. They are just envious of your mad skillz :P
Seriously... I personally think it's better to get a hater then a lover. Then you know that your music is so awesome that someone feels they have to lower it in order to make themselves feel good.
So yeah. Keep at your awesome music man!
hey thanks man, i really needed a comment like this. The bombers have gotten me so discouraged, NG was the only way I could get my songs out, and now it's ruined. Eh, oh well. I'll just have to start writing stuff for myself.
thanks though, glad you and your friends like my music. keep rocking man \m/
Well...
To be honest. This was a lot of progression since your last work.
This is some serious improvement. I'm dead serious. This is extremely good from your previous things.
A couple things though:
Progression: I agree with everyone else, doesn't seem to really take off. Though through out the whole thing I think it maintains a good melody, and has decent progression, so if you could vary it up some that would be good, but it's already decent enough.
Maracas?: UGH! They were going the whole time! They could stop every once and a while. Please. TURN THEM DOWN OR OFF! Ugh. Yeah. They were good for parts of it, but I felt they were a little overused.
Synths: You used a good variation of synths, I like the ones you choose. It gave it a hip-hop feeling. A few strings here, and a good drum beat, a few weird things here, and the deep bass synth to give it the real hip-hop feeling.
Improvements?: I thought that you could of used some vocals from a movie in this. Like right after the gun shot in the beginning someone were to say "Don't get up" or something to that matter. That's just me dreamin though. Another thing, I've already mentioned perviously. Maraca thing. Gotta go. Other then that I liked it quite a bit. It reminded me of an age of the empire sound-track. When you first start off in the dark ages... yeah. This song had a good aura behind it. The times it wanted to sound dark it did, and other times it had a happy feeling to it.
Great job with this man! Serious improvement from the past!
I'm gonna send you a pm about some stuffs. So look for that.
~ Lubz :D
lol, maracas... nope, those were hiphop snares from FPC, now that your mention it though, they kinda do sound like maracas, hahaha
the vocals thing... ive been trying to find out how to rip the vocals from the real song into mine. i know its possible, ive seen it in other peoples submissions, but i just dont know how to do it, ive been working on that for probably 3 days straight (i had a face injury so i could skip school friday.) and i still havent came up with anything.
thanks for the review, this is the type of review i always like to get, even though it probably took you some time to think it out
Awesomes.
I love it.
Very much like redemption that we've all come to love. Yet this one has an awesome drum beat to it.
Awesome job man. I've got nothing to critique.
-1 because it's a remix.
What...
What's Vec3?
Not sure what it is.
This is pretty good. Though it's got that generic techno/trance beat to it. Do something to make it your own. Make it random! Spice it up!
Other then the annoying beat, the bass was good, and it had that weird wind noise flying around the whole time.
When the actual lead picked up, it became better. I liked it more so after that.
Overall. Good job.
Vengeance Essential Clubsounds 3 Its professional sounds you can buy off the internet for a pretty good price. Lol. I love the beat. i shouldve changed it though... Thanks for the review! :P
Yeah...
This is really weird.
Everything flows together fine, yet it still seems to be randomly thrown out there... Maybe that's just me.
So. I don't really know what I can critique about it though. Seems really it's own thing.
So yeah.
OK man!
The finished Space (with the beats) should be out sune
This is fantastic!
This is absolutely incredible!
It gives an awesome feeling of darkness and evil.
The drums are extremely impressive. The violins and cellos and basses and all that jazz flow perfectly together.
Loops almost perfectly!
You give an awesome outlook on classical music. Great job!
loops perfectly for me :c... i'm doing something wrong here, gawd I need to straighten this out.
But i'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review! I love epic style orchestral musics too :D!
STUFF!
I actually really liked the beginning man.
I don't see why people didn't like it. I 100% agree about the drums though. They are extremely creative.
I liked the ending too... so. Yeah. Nothing to complain about this really.
Good job with it.
Well thanks. Haven't gotten any comments on this in a long while. I appreciate it.
Yes. HAHAHAHAHAHAA!
This is so awesome man. I want more more more!
You have some insane drumming skillz. And you're lyrics are absolutely awesomely huliarious.
I didn't play.. I recorded. And there's 2 more. Just couldn't put 'em up because of the limit.
You sir...
are awesome.
Angry techno is already a genre...
but apparently you've made some weird random genre thats... Well actually pretty awesome.
Loven it.
Awesome. I want more sir. =P
Well, I've already said this several times but I wasn't the one playing. I just recorded this while Evin (the one in the song) was goofing off at a band practice. There's 2 more but the 2-per-day limit only let me do this one and the other. You'll have them tomorrow though.
I can create melody, I can create a beat, but I'm not the one who creates the emotions you feel.
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