Hahahaa...
Thats awesome. Gotta great beat to it. Kept right to the tune, even if it was highly repetitive it was still awesome because of that beat it's got to it. I think the addition of the strings/reeds was an awesome idea. Gives it it's old feeling of Drunken sailorness but throws in some awesome synths to make it all the more awesome.
Good job with this!
LOL! yeah, it is terribly repetitive, but thats the only bit of the song i remember! hahah. well i did add some stuff in, but i HATE that awful main synth. but i am pleased with the beat LOL. thanks. i cant believe you actually ENJOYED this! ROFLMAO.
thanks for everything! :D:D:D
P.S. i have other kids songs if you like em. "kid pow" check out fluffsy the sheep! :D:D:D
Nice.
Pretty sweet stuff here. I think the drums could use a little more prescense in the song, and maybe change up the lead guitar occaisionaly.
Other then that, good job.
Glad you like it. Me and Ash have both discussed a possible reworking of this piece, possibly adding a guitar solo and some new parts. It'll probably never happen but we shall see.
Thanks for the review.
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That was... What the hell? It's just. Okay, I think I got high off this song.
WOASHAAAAAAA
Bye.
I assure you I wasn't on crack or any other kind of drugs both medical or recreational when I made this unless you count alcohol. Thanks for the review.
Good job.
Another impressive song from you.
I would have to say this one is pretty great. Though it does have some things that could be made better it's got a great tune to its own way anyways. One thing that I have to critique about is the drums. They are great, it's just on my speakers they seem to be faded too much to the right, maybe that's what you were going for, but it seemed to distract me from the song.
The vocals were quite impressive along with the lyrics. Way to stick up for the underdogs! I tend to be one myself, and so I find that this applies in my life. Many of my friends are also "Underdogs" looked down upon cause they act differently then the rest of the population. Many of those lyrics are thoughts that cross my mind when someone nags on me for being myself.
Great job here Cayler. Hope to hear more from you in the future!
Actually I don't know about the drums, they could be to the right and I didn't know because I didn't do any mastering as far as the drums are concerned. However, I've never heard the problem myself and haven't heard that from anyone else, so you may need to check your speakers. lol The lyrics still have some room for improvement, but do get the point across effectively enough. I'm glad they apply to you and your friends, I know how it feels to be looked down upon for acting differently.
Nice nice.
I like it. Like it a lot.
What kind of guitar did you use for it? Sounds quite good. I don't think you should of taken out the claps in it though. They were really awesome.
Good job here sir.
the guitar used in this was the main guitar synthesizer in F.L. studio 8.2 Also known as FLSLAYER in the toolbox. But as for the clapping I wanted a different feel for this song as opposed to part one. Thanks for the review however.
It's good.
But then it ends.
I hate you.
Wow, i love you.
Will you marry me?
No. jk.
Anyway... ITS A PREVIEW!
So just wait...
Look how much better i am.
HECK YES!
LPAULEY IS BACK!
Finally man... Also right when I got my computer back... so make sure to check out the 7 days of lub coming your way. =P
Ok enough self advertisement. To tell you the truth... I started listening...
and a yawn came to mind. The slow pace of the song was wearing on me.
BOOM! From nowhere it burst into a fury of awesomeness and classical... Agh... what's it called. Delight? No. Enlightment? Better, but not the word. Extreme pleasure. That's what the word I'm looking for. It was fantastic.
This is so much of an improvement. SO MUCH. I'm dead serious when I say that to man. You've taken your old work, that mind you wasn't bad, and shredded it compared to this.
One thing that I will say could be improved... The ending. It was very fast. Not a problem with that, but it ends to quickly for it's speed. Atleast in my opinion. I think to improve this you could add a powerful last note. And maybe make it echo off.
Other then that man. You've done an awesome job here, I don't know as if there is more that I can say.
9/10 (Very close to a 10/10, but like you said there are somethings that need to be fixed)
5/5 (Very very much a 5.)
Downloaded (Yes indeed. I don't think I needed a little add on here. Oh well, better not stop the flow.)
Fav'd (My all time fav of yours, and it's going down as #4 on my fav lists. Make sure to make an art cover for it so it can look pretty on my page. If you want I would be happy to make one for you.)
That sir. Is the end of my huge review.
Well done. Well done.
made me feel all warm and tingly.
but in all honesty, thanks.
I think i'm going to finish this one up for a while within the next week, and then make revisions to my demo and progress uploads which are ickk
i really liked the ending
what would you change about it?
like do it the same, but sustain the last note and hold it out?
midi files don't do that T.T
once i get a cable i'll do it and upload to you and you can judge it.
thanks so much for the review man.
i just don't know how i follow this song up.
Notther song...
er.. Loop.
That's beside the point though, another song that blew my mind. The song is great. The synth is really catchy... The piano. That's what solved it for me... That's what made it in my opinion.
You did another awesome job here.
Yet it's a loop =\
You need to teach me to sidechain sometime man... Anyways... Thanks for the dedication!
Darn, SO CLOSE TO A 10!
What? Why not?
Why will they never hear it? Go. Do it. Don't hold back. Believe me... Your only hurting yourself by not. GO GO GO!
Did you yet?
No?
THEN GO! NOW!
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GO!
Ugh, as long as you are still reading this, I guess I should give a review to this aswell.
I really liked what you did here with this song. Very much of a blues jazz... What synth did you use for the sax?
Good job overall man! Keep it up, and GO SAY SORRY TO HER!
OKAY, I'LL GO! I'LL TAKE HER A CD, GET DOWN ON MY KNEES AND PLEAD FOR FORGIVENESS, WHATEVER IT TAKES!
And I used DSK SaxophoneZ for the sax: http://rekkerd.org/dsk-releases-saxop honez/
I'm glad you liked it, and I'm going to tell her I'm sorry...
Never heard original
This was really weird.
Oriental? Some.
Ambient? Some.
Crazy? Some.
Classical? Some.
And a hint of waffles I do believe.
Pretty awesome song here. Very ambient-like which is what I suppose you were going for.
Good job!
Yes! Everything I was going for, with a hint of waffles! Nothing could make me happier!
I can create melody, I can create a beat, but I'm not the one who creates the emotions you feel.
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