Gonna eat you.
OMnomnom. You were tasty.
You want what? You want a serious review?
Well then, here you go:
This sounds pretty good, the drums are really the good part in this. Though the melody could be better, it does a nice job complementing the drums.
Overall 8/10.
~ Lublub with a long overdue review.
Un-serious reviews are fine, especially when you rate me a point higher than you said you would :) I'm pretty proud of the drums, and the fact that I made all these synths, but composition wasn't very strong when I wrote this. Glad you like the drums, though!
THANKEE FUR TEH REVYOO.
The opening is good..
Not too sure about the rest though. Sounds alright I guess.
Good job!
8/10
THAKSN!!!!!!!!
So uh...
Could you Pm me? I just don't get this? What's up with the "\m/"...
HAHAHA what a fucktard. Whoa, 'kay that was a little brutal. Metal brings out the brutality in everyone though.
Beast song man! Awesome riffs, Great drums, nothing more you could ask for!
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thanks broski \m/
Nice...
Some recomendations I have:
You are using a lot of preset instruments, I can't name them off the top of my head, but I can hear them. Try to make your own unique ones. Even if it's just a little tweak, those can make a large difference.
1:30, or around that area, where the bass and synths and drums and EVERYTHING were going at once... That seemed a little too crowded.
If I think I heard what the mircosoft sam said correctly. Ya could definitely take that out...
Now, for some positive feedback:
The song was really well put together, aside from a couple spots sounding a little crowded, this had a good vibe to it.
It had an awesome opening, I wouldn't change anything with it. (Other then unique synths maybe?)
The beat in this is totally what made the song. It was so in your face, random, fast-paced, groovy. All things I like in a drum beat.
You had a good use of effects, They almost perfected your transitions.
Overall a 9/10 and a 5/5 from me. (Downloaded too)
Nice job with this! I'd like to hear more like this, recommend a few songs that you might have made in the past that sound something like this?
ok, uhhh Thanks very much for the review!
And yeah, I did over some of the preset fills
And the words in the song said, JUMP!
Then it turned Jumpstyle
If you heard the bassdrum, it had that kind of style to it.
Now, it looks like you like doom, so, you know the game left 4 dead?
Well, I made a song using the horde sounds. Its called Raving Zombies
I think you'll like it.
Keep playing doom
Because I somtimes do!
WHAT IS THIS!?
Ehhhhhhhh...
It's so, so weird....
I gotta agree, sounds like a clown for some reason.
The rapid snares are the only thing I really enjoyed. The rest felt too akward.
Sorry for 2 bad reviews :(
WHAT THIS IS!? THIS IS IT!!! :3
Well, any reviews are appreciated, and an 8 doesn't feel bad at all. So thanks! :)
Hmm.
I thought it was okay, but not my fav of yours.
Felt like it was lacking :( I don't know how exactly... but it just. Well, it just wasn't my taste :(
Sorry for the kinda downing review.
You know, I have this feeling too: something's lacking... Maybe it's a pad or something. I'm satisfied with the chorus, but the middle part is missing something.
Well, thanks anyway. No worries :)
Hmm...
Interesting song you got here...
You have a good melody going... once it picks up.
The opening is a little iffy.
If you were going for hardcore style, You fell behind... Hardstyle? I could see how this could be, and if you're asking yourself now: "What's the differencec between hardcore and hardstyle?" This is how I see it. Hardstyle = Drums and hard bass, Hardcore = Just hard bass.
Add a little bit more stronger bit of bass on here and I think it would be a lot better. It also ends a little quickly.
Other then those things. Ya got some interesting stuff going here. Keep at it.
thanx, Ive been working on hardstyle and the different elements of it. its weird trying to get good drum patterns to randomly throw in. I used an osc. for the bass...the intro is random because its hard to come up with a 1 measure intro melody with drum patterns and random squeaks and beeps for me. I plan to experiment with this flp file to make it a good track.
~xTc~
Onions Mean Everything Good Alright.
Hmmm... I didn't feel the bass... Sorry sir. Just not there :(
Ways I would say to improve that feature?
#1 New kick. That's a very punchy kick. Get a kick, or make one, with extreme power. Something that makes you go "Woah..."
#2 Add a bass boost on the bass, and turn it up a little. It doesn't seem to be present. I can hear it in the background sometimes, but then it seems like it's just kinda hanging out in the back of class. Like the kid who's a "Bad-ass" and doesn't do his homework. Just sits there. Yeah. Too bad they didn't know that if they did work, they would get some awesome stuff. (Bass)
#3 This is just a suggestion. I have no clue how it would all work, but maybe a little distortion?
Yeah, Those were all suggestions, and as you can tell by my score. I have nothing really against this song. Just that I think it could use a little bass. Moar bass = More POWAH!
So, those are a few ideas that I have. No?
Okay. Thats the end of this review. Hope ya don't hate meh.
Maybe the bass is just too low so not every speaker can play it, because I think the kick gets a bit muffled by the other instruments because there's so much bass. Makes sense? No? :(
How do you mean distortion? And where? On the main synth, or the drums? So many questions...
So, thanks for those suggestions. And the 9. :D
Oh, and I don't hate you. (Only a little :3 )
Hmmm...
Very very ambient. That's for sure. I'm not sure if I liked the high pitch synth... personally.
The rest seemed pretty good though. Even though that really only consisted of drums and bells.
Good job with this, not your best, yet still good.
Yeah, I've done better. I'm mostly proud of the part with the snares right after the one minute mark because it breaks the ambience for a while.
Thanks for listening!
Prsonally I prefer the first...
This one was still really melodic and peaceful. I guess that would be why it's called ambience.
Good job with this man. I like the tune ya had going, but like I said. I prefered the first.
*doesn't mention anything about hating boobass*
Nice job! :D
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